Eric: I won't repeat what was said in class today; you got some pretty good feedback. You've got solid arguments and a clear voice. You sound a bit unenthusiastic, and this makes me less convinced. Also, as I mentioned, say more about the specific car so I have a better sense of why THIS car, in particular, is great for you. You've got a good start with this. You seem confident and clear.
You had some really solid arguments and good points! I liked that you weren't fidgeting or moving around in a distracting way. Maybe next time try to remove, or make shorter the pauses in between each of your points/ statements and be a little bit more animated. Good first one though!
Good arguments and good job sitting still and not fidgeting. Next time you could try to pause less frequently and speak in a less monotone, more personable manner.
Eric: I won't repeat what was said in class today; you got some pretty good feedback. You've got solid arguments and a clear voice. You sound a bit unenthusiastic, and this makes me less convinced. Also, as I mentioned, say more about the specific car so I have a better sense of why THIS car, in particular, is great for you. You've got a good start with this. You seem confident and clear.
ReplyDeleteYou had some really solid arguments and good points! I liked that you weren't fidgeting or moving around in a distracting way. Maybe next time try to remove, or make shorter the pauses in between each of your points/ statements and be a little bit more animated. Good first one though!
ReplyDeleteGood arguments and good job sitting still and not fidgeting. Next time you could try to pause less frequently and speak in a less monotone, more personable manner.
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